Skip to content

Join Today

Member portal

NSW Teachers Federation
NSW Teachers Federation
  • Home
  • Courses
    • All Courses
    • All Conferences
    • Primary
    • Secondary
  • Journal
    • Journal Issue
    • For your Classroom
    • For your Staffroom
    • For your Future
    • For your Research
  • Podcast
  • About
    • Who we are
    • What we do
    • Our Presenters
    • FAQ
    • Contact Us
NSW Teachers Federation
  • Home
  • Courses
    • All Courses
    • All Conferences
    • Primary
    • Secondary
  • Journal
    • Journal Issue
    • For your Classroom
    • For your Staffroom
    • For your Future
    • For your Research
  • Podcast
  • About
    • Who we are
    • What we do
    • Our Presenters
    • FAQ
    • Contact Us

Subject: English

Contemporary (Im)possibilities?: Making Digital Texts ‘Doable’ in the Classroom

Rosemary Henzell helps teachers imagine new possibilities for their English classroom…

But first, the fear…

When the new NESA English Standard Stage 6 Syllabus was released, I imagine many teachers were surprised, and more than a little confused, by the new Module A: Contemporary Possibilities. Even for someone like myself, who has been experimenting and working with digital texts in the classroom for several years now, it seems daunting. Most English teachers were drawn to our subject area because we love literature – books, poetry, plays…the REAL stuff. How can digital texts compete with the richness and depth of the texts we love…and are they even literature?

A second area of concern, and an extremely valid one, is technical expertise: many teachers have little to no experience in building websites or creating digital multimodal texts and, with limited time and resources, how are they supposed to a) learn and b) teach others? I have led several digital units within my faculty, and witnessed firsthand (and felt!) the fear and uncertainty many teachers feel when they are asked to step into this brave new world.

So should we all just choose a film and forget about the notion of digital texts, consigning them to the perennially “too hard” basket? Or could we perhaps take this as an opportunity to engage students in the creation of something wonderful and deeply relevant to their lives?

Imagine if students could…

  • Compose a digital essay incorporating links, images, videos and a link to a survey to gather reader responses?
  • Build a website that explores a local issue or event, with groups of students responsible for 1-2 pages each that included elements such as videos they have made, creative responses, and a quiz?
  • Create a Choose Your Own Adventure experience that offers different reading paths through the story, with added videos, narratives and external links?

A basic unit overview

Module A offers us a chance to help students explore and interpret the digital world they inhabit, and support them to become creators of meaningful online experiences, making them agents in their learning and the world beyond the classroom. Below is a brief outline of how you might approach this kind of unit:

  1. ‘The Good, the Bad and the Ugly’: How have digital technologies affected the way we communicate for better and for worse? Begin with a discussion about the very real issues of online and digital communication. The Guardian Interactive Site The Seven Deadly Digital Sins has some great conversation starters.
  1. Close study of an interactive site or digital narrative focused on a key event or issue. SBS Interactive has an incredible collection of texts on a wide range of issues. They cover a range of text types and offer different reader experiences, for example:
    • The Boat (digital narrative about Vietnamese refugees) with resources available;
    • Cronulla Riots: The Day That Shocked The Nation (documentary and interactive site);
    • Exit Australia (Choose Your Own Adventure simulation presenting Australia as a conflict zone);
    • My Grandmother’s Lingo (short text highlighting endangered languages by teaching you several words of Marra, an endangered Indigenous language).
  1. Creating social change: How global movements are harnessing the power of social media and digital technologies. Examine movements or groups that are relevant or inspiring to students in order to guide their project design. World Pulse is one example, using social networks to change women’s lives around the world.

Possible relevant syllabus outcomes for the unit:

  • EN11-2: A student uses and evaluates processes, skills and knowledge required to effectively respond to and compose texts in different modes, media and technologies
  • EN11-7: A student understands and explains the diverse ways texts can represent personal and public worlds
  • EN11-9: A student reflects on, assesses and monitors own learning and develops individual and collaborative processes to become an independent learner

Creation: the basic project

Students design and build a website or interactive online experience that explores, for example, a local event, place, person or history, or a social issue of importance to them. Their aim is to utilise the forms and features of digital texts to enhance the audience’s experience and promote active participation. The most important points are that the project should be centred around something that matters to students, and that it be shared beyond the classroom. Everything else is up for negotiation. To help you plan an approach to this process, here are some details about how to manage successful Project Based Learning.

The magic of project based learning

Project Based Learning (PBL) has been around for a long time. Its synchronicity with 21st Century Learning ideals and the possibilities it offers for engagement with the Cross-Curricular Priorities mean that more and more schools and teachers are embracing it as an authentic education model. The key to successful PBL lies in the following eight Essential Elements of Gold Standard project design:

  • Key Knowledge, Understanding, and Success Skills – The project is focused on student learning goals, including standards-based content and skills such as critical thinking/problem solving, communication, collaboration, and self-management.
  • Challenging Problem or Question – The project is framed by a meaningful problem to solve or a question to answer, at the appropriate level of challenge.
  • Sustained Inquiry – Students engage in a rigorous, extended process of asking questions, finding resources, and applying information.
  • Authenticity – The project features real-world context, tasks and tools, quality standards, or impact, or, speaks to students’ personal concerns, interests, and issues in their lives.
  • Student Voice and Choice – Students make some decisions about the project, including how they work and what they create.
  • Reflection – Students and teachers reflect on learning, the effectiveness of their inquiry and project activities, the quality of student work, and obstacles and how to overcome them.
  • Critique and Revision – Students give, receive, and use feedback to improve their process and products.
  • Public Product – Students make their project work public by explaining, displaying and/or presenting it to people beyond the classroom.

Source: http://www.bie.org/about/what_pbl

In terms of engaging students in their learning, the concepts of Authenticity, Student Voice and Choice, and a Public Product are crucial. When young people know that they are making something for the ‘real world’ beyond the classroom, it suddenly matters so much more.

For more information and resources, the Department’s Futures Learning site has great material, including a PBL toolkit.

Digital texts made manageable: getting started with Google apps

All Department teachers and students have access to Google’s G Suite through the portal. There are a few reasons I find Google apps such a great tool to work with:

  1. Students need to sign in using their school email, allowing you to track their participation and giving you more control. I found with sites like Edmodo, students tend to forget their password or email account and need to rejoin groups multiple times. Before I used Classroom, I would share Google Docs with students, but they would appear as Anonymous Animals, so I never knew who was writing what.
  2. Everything is integrated, so it is straightforward to move things between Classroom, Sites, etc. It is also far more streamlined and intuitive than Office (in my opinion) which means that people adapt to it and master the basics quickly.
  3. Simple sharing options with various levels of control and privacy. Once you master the Share menu, you can give others access to things in seconds. No more USBs, downloading or emailing things.
  4. Work saves automatically. Since you never have to save your work, you can never forget to save your work. No more lost documents! Also, the History function allows you to revert to previous versions quickly, so even if someone accidentally deletes everything, you can recover it easily.

The apps you’re most likely to use

Sites

An incredibly simple and intuitive site builder. You can choose a pre-made template, or start from a basic site and customise it. Sites integrates with all other Google Apps, so you can upload and insert content in seconds once it is in your Drive. The teacher creates the site then invites students to be editors. Here is a StoryWeb site my Year 9 class made about The Taming of the Shrew in 2016. And here is a tutorial from YouTube about how to use Sites.

Drive

The hub of all your Google apps content. Everything you create will be available in your Drive, and it is available from any computer, anywhere, any time. If you use Classroom, students’ assignment work will appear in your Classroom folder. You can share folders or your whole Drive with others, and the Team Drive function now lets you create collaborative Drives. Here is a tutorial on some basics of Drive by the same person as the one above.

Google Docs, Slides and Sheets

These are Google versions of Word, PowerPoint and Excel. They don’t have all the same advanced functions, but you cannot beat the benefit of students creating a shared document and NEVER having to hear the excuse “Jane’s got our work and she’s away” ever again. Click here for a helpful tutorial.

Forms

At its most basic level, Forms makes quizzes and questionnaires. The responses get collated to a Sheet. However, you can also use it to build in interactivity. Depending on the response chosen, the reader is directed to a certain page, or required to complete an activity before continuing. Well worth investigating possible applications and exploring this tutorial.

Classroom

Having used Edmodo for several years, I switched over to Classroom two years ago. At first it was a bit limited in comparison, but Google continue to build more Classroom features, and it is an increasingly powerful online environment. Since everything integrates so smoothly, it makes sharing work and resources simple.

Final thoughts

Given how much change we are all going to be managing next year, it may not be feasible to leap into digital PBL straight away. However, if you dip your metaphorical toe in the water with a Google Doc here and a Classroom there, you will be amazed at how quickly it integrates into your practice. Slowly build up your own knowledge and confidence, and train students in the apps, through small tasks.

At the end of the day, the goal is engagement and authentic audience. Use the technology to help students reach beyond the classroom and become active voices in the wider world. In the words of Nelson Mandela, “Education is the most powerful weapon we can use to change the world”, and really, that is the contemporary possibility that matters most.

Rosemary currently teaches English at Willoughby Girls High School. She completed her Master of Teaching in 2013, having spent seven years as an adult ESL teacher and TESOL trainer in Australia and Japan. Her MTeach Action Research Project investigated how to raise student confidence and agency in essay writing. Rosemary is part of her school’s Professional Learning Team, and is currently investigating how Project Based Learning and Teaching For Understanding frameworks can be utilised in the English classroom.

 

On Site, On Tour and Online: the State Library of NSW and You

Pauline Fitzgerald welcomes you to the fascinating collection at the State Library of NSW…

No history of Australia, no local or family history, no national debate about Indigenous reconciliation or History Wars, no arguments about origins, attitudes, behaviours or politics can be written – or contested – without reference to archival and collecting institutions, and most require consultation with the Mitchell. Richard Neville, Mitchell Librarian

Supporting you

The State Library of NSW holds a unique collection in excess of 6 million items and valued at $3.15 billion. With 157,000 prints and drawings, 1.5 million photographs and negatives, 12 linear kilometres of manuscripts, 100,000 maps, not to mention 2.5 million books, how does the State Library of NSW support students and teachers?

In 2009 Learning Services was established. For K-12 students and teachers, the key objective has been connecting students and teachers with the extraordinary collections of the State Library – the home of Australia’s history. In the seven years since, a rich and diverse program has been developed to enhance learning opportunities for students and teachers around NSW. Programs are offered on site, online and on tour.

To date 57.51% of schools across NSW have connected with our services.

On site

On site in Macquarie Street, the State Library offers a range of excursions, all of which link to the NSW Syllabus for the Australian Curriculum. Fundamental to the development of our programs is the importance of introducing students to original collection material as we are well aware of the unique and important role the State Library holds as custodians of the documentary heritage of the nation.

Nowhere else in Australia will students have the opportunity to see, first hand, items such as First Fleet journals, Matthew Flinders maps, Henry Lawson’s death mask or Shakespeare’s first folio, to name but a few of our collection highlights.

The power of seeing ‘the real thing’ cannot be overstated.

Examples of our on-site programs include:

  • British Colonisation, one of our most popular programs, explores the arrival of the First Fleet, early days in the colony and the strength and resilience of Australia’s first peoples. Bringing the 1817-1818 Edward Close image Costumes of the Australasians to life through role play and interaction with original collection items such as James Cook artefacts, Aboriginal language lists, and convict material creates a rich and memorable learning experience for students.

  • Similarly, Walking into Australia is an immersive workshop providing students with the opportunity to step into the shoes of inland explorers Edward Eyre, Burke and Wills, Kennedy and Jackey Jackey, and Ludwig Leichhardt as they venture into the unknown. The survival zone truly transports the students as they struggle against strong head winds (industrial fans) in oversized gumboots lugging a heavy backpack to recreate a little of the physical hardship faced by early explorers.

  • Seeking Shakespeare  is a particularly popular program and the Library was particularly active in 2016 as we commemorated the 400th anniversary of Shakespeare’s death. The Library collections include the first, second, third and fourth folios and the Library is the only institution in Australia to hold all four folios. The digitisation of the first folio  has made it accessible to classrooms across Australia. A visit to the exquisite Shakespeare room is a huge highlight of this program and it is now possible to take a peek inside this special room via a virtual tour.

Support for the HSC

Support for HSC students is core business for the State Library and tickets for our HSC student seminars are highly sought after and quick to sell out.

Co-hosted with Sydney Living Museums, History Extension: The Project gives students the opportunity to develop their research skills and gain valuable advice, resources and inspiration before they embark on their major work.

For English Extension 2, wordeXpress offers a similar program with subject experts and successful ex-students providing guidance in how to get started and maintain focus to achieve a first class major work. The wordeXpress initiative was developed with the NSW Education Standards Authority (formerly BOSTES) and in addition to student seminars we also host the awards ceremony for students featured in the wordeXpress Young Writers Showcase.

On tour

We are particularly pleased to offer wordeXpress student seminars in regional areas and last year we travelled to Tamworth and Coffs Harbour to afford students in regional NSW the same opportunities students in the Sydney region enjoy. The State Library Foundation provides financial support to make this possible and this forms part of our commitment to serve the people of NSW and improve equity of access no matter where in the state you live. Other services targeting HSC students include Introduction to HSC Resources, which is a workshop available both on site and via video conference.

Online

In addition to on-site and regional learning programs a major focus for Learning Services is the development of online learning resources. The State Library launched a new website in February 2016 and Learning is now accessible from the homepage. This increased visibility has resulted in a 250% increase in visits to the site and we have received very positive feedback on the resources we provide.

If you cannot come to us we can always come to you – with a virtual excursion. Our virtual excursions all feature original collection materials and are offered free of charge through DART connections.

Current topics include:

  • From Captain Cook to the Convicts

  • Art Around the Library

  • Explorers of the Australian Interior – Brave or Foolhardy

Captain James Cook – watercolour on ivory miniature in circular frame, ca. 1780-1784, a128550

New programs under development are:

  • Mary Reibey – The woman on the $20 note
  • On the Move – Migration to Australia
  • Shakespeare’s Folios

Learning activities currently available address syllabus outcomes for the NSW Syllabus for the Australian Curriculum – History, Geography and English. Learning Activities for Visual Arts are also available.

Our most popular online resources are:

Migration to Australia in the 1800’s

HSC Area of Study: Discovery

The Gold Rush

In addition to learning activities tailor-made for classroom use, other important areas of the website for teachers and students include:

Stories

Here you will find curated collections showcasing people, places and ideas inspired by the collections. You can travel with the Dutch, the Portuguese or James Cook in Voyages of Discovery: the Great South Land  or visit the goldfields of Hill End in the Holtermann Collection or delve deep into the stories and lives of Indigenous Sydney before European settlement in Eora . More than 80 stories are currently available and being added to constantly.

DX Lab

We are very proud to be the home of Australia’s first and only cultural-heritage innovation lab that supports new ways of design thinking, experimentation and deep research in the digital humanities. Our DX Lab is where experimentation and research happens and we use the latest technologies to find rich and interesting ways to explore our collections and data sets.

Professional learning and partnerships

We are grateful for the positive working relationship we have, including:

  • History Teachers Association
  • Society and Culture Teachers Association
  • English Teachers Association
  • School Library Association NSW
  • NESA, DOE and AIS

These partnerships ensure we are developing resources which meet the needs of students and teachers and lead the way in providing up to date resources which address changes to curriculum.

Professional learning for teachers is another important aspect of State Library services and as an endorsed provider we offer an annual conference and Reach Out! a FREE interactive workshop offered in schools around NSW. Please contact us to find out how you can have a State Library educator run a workshop for teachers in your area.

If you would like further details on any of our programs and resources please contact the Learning Services team learning.library@sl.nsw.gov.au  or 9273 1778

Poetry: “thoughts that breathe and words that burn”

Jowen Hillyer engages Year 9 with guerrilla poetry…

 

Poetry is “thoughts that breathe and words that burn” (Gray). So how do I convince year 9 that this does not mean burning poetry in the quad?

When it comes to poetry we often find it difficult to engage our students beyond a bit of slam poetry and an acrostic they did in primary school. I found during our poetry units in the past that while we tested and explored and questioned it was often teacher directed and led.

Of course this is essential – students can’t break the rules until they learn them and they can’t know what speaks to them without looking at lots and lots of rich and varied examples. However, where do they go after that assessment?

Do they ever get the opportunity to move away from “what does this poem mean?” and instead answer the question “what does poetry mean to me?”

I have always loved the abbreviated Gray quote: “Poetry is thoughts that breathe and words that burn”. To me it always summed up the idea that poetry was more than words on a page. It was big feeling and big ideas told in the most concise and provocative way possible.

big feeling and big ideas told in the most concise and provocative way possible

I needed to get this same feeling across to year 9 students (a pretty mixed bunch of kids who tolerated English but would much rather be somewhere else). We had already completed the prescribed unit and assessment. They had written a comparative essay on two poems and studied all the techniques and poetic forms. Yet still poetry meant nothing to them, despite my best efforts…

So began the “Guerrilla Poetry Project”. In small discussion groups with some trusty old butcher’s paper they had to brainstorm, then present, what they thought the Gray quote meant. In a nutshell (apart from a few kids who insisted it meant we burn the poetry books) it was agreed that poetry is not a static thing; it describes and demands action.

poetry is not a static thing; it describes and demands action

For my part, I wanted to SEE how they felt and thought.

Divergent teaching calls for a different type of assessment, one that is not assessing against a common set of criteria but one that allows for artistic freedom. Project based learning marries well with this aim. An authentic assessment, immersion and engagement are all part of the learning cycle. Please see the attachment at the end of this article for planning ideas and suggested poems.

So why choose guerrilla poetry?

Really it began for selfish reasons; guerrilla poetry appeals to my creative, fun English nerd; the one who giggles at literary puns, corrects menus in my head and spends hours deliberating over which literary figures I would have over for dinner.

corrects menus in my head and spends hours deliberating over which literary figures I would have over for dinner

For the uninitiated, guerrilla poetry is publishing poetry in unconventional ways and in unconventional places. As the Red Room Company explains, “Guerrilla means ‘little war'” in Spanish. Poets who publish guerrilla poems are fighting their own “little war” to find new audiences for and new ways of writing poetry”. To do this I needed to generate excitement, get permission and get creative.

Curiosity and wonder are still alive and well in our secondary students – we just need to coax it out sometimes.

Our box of supplies was inspired by our book room. I work in a school which originated in 1908 and the building I work in was built in 1925. Some of the texts have been there that long. In a move from an old book room to a new modernised system we uncovered stacks of poetry text books from the 1920s-1960s. I knew these could form the basis of my guerrilla poetry supply box. Students could read them, rip them, create with them and play with them. I also added chalk, ornaments, some bizarre dolls’ heads from a $2 shop, wooden spoons, parachute soldiers, fun stationery and more.

I showed the students some images of guerrilla poetry to inspire them and told them all about the following different types:

Broadsiding

Leaving poetry in unexpected places – in a book, on a bus, in pigeonholes, under doors.

Some examples were under car

windscreen wipers and in the

pigeonholes of ‘non-humanities’

teachers.

Chapbooks

Little self-created books of poetry left in unexpected places.

Chalk art

A favourite of students is chalk art; especially for the students in distinction classes/GATS groups who would never think to graffiti. In this project they get to do it, with poetry and with permission!

And some others, including:

  • installations;
  • transient art (art that is not permanent);
  • poem in a pocket (sneaking up on someone and secretly leaving a poem in their pocket!);
  • publishing poetry on the sides of buses or on the back of toilet doors.

You do need to consider your context.

I have to admit that I never tell my students about the possibility of sneaking up on people to put poetry on their person (I really do not want to open that can of worms). A few of my students absolutely loved creating installations that were there one day and gone the next – they got to have their own ‘superhero’ moment, to be mysterious – there is freedom in anonymity for students when they are being asked to express themselves.

As we progressed into the next unit of work, the guerrilla poetry task was their independent learning.

Students were to email me photographs of their ‘subversive’ guerrilla activities. These involved:

  • Dropping army parachute men with their favourite quotes on them out the second-storey windows at school.
Here students are literally ‘poetry bombing’ the quad with parachute men. The poetry choice was unusual – not war poetry but a poem for girls with the key message “never grow a wishbone where your backbone ought to be”.
  • A series of wooden spoons with different lines of poetry left in a jar on the Principal’s desk.
T.S. Eliot inspired : “I have measured out my life with coffee spoons”. The idea was appropriated in this installation.
  • Poems in pigeonholes…. or fridges.
We are sure this would have been a nice moment for a frazzled teacher grabbing their lunch.
  • Chalk poetry and origami
Boxes made out of prose, filled with tiny origami hearts covered in poetry found their way onto my desk months after the project finished.
  • Poems in bowling shoes at sport.
A rural bowling alley for school sport was the scene for this guerrilla action.

There was no formalised assessment for this project based learning, as the formal assessment had already taken place. The measure of learning was anecdotally obvious – the art installations, the ongoing exploration of poetry. What they were asked to do was to, as our syllabus encourages, reflect on their learning.

They needed to answer the big question: “What does poetry mean to ME and how did my guerrilla poetry reflect this?”

All students had different answers of course; some found that certain poetry connected with their lives, others discovered rhythms, one or two started bravely adding their own words to their installations but all of them found more in poetry than they could have imagined.

This unit allowed us to step away from NAPLAN circle filling. It allowed for true, authentic engagement with purpose, audience and text and it allowed me to see my students grow in love of literature and language.

Online Resources

The Red Room Company
From their website: Founded by Johanna Featherstone in 2003, The Red Room Company (RRC) has grown to be Australia’s key organisation for the creation and commissioning of new poetry by established and emerging poets as well as students. Their mission is to make poetry a meaningful part of everyday life. They collaborate with schools, poets and communities. http://redroomcompany.org/media/uploads/spineout-collabo/spineout_guerrilla_poetry.pdf

The Buck Institute for Education
This organisation is an instructional leader in project based learning. There are useful resources, hints, tips and support. This is an international organisation which seeks advice and feedback from many sources, countries and contexts. http://www.bie.org/

Bianca Hewes
Bianca Hewes is a teacher leading the research and process of PBL in schools. She has generously shared templates, ideas and projects, including the publication of K-10 resources

  • https://biancahewes.wordpress.com/2013/05/11/project-based-learning-and-the-australian-curriculum-general-capabilities-part-3/
  • https://biancahewes.wordpress.com/2014/01/23/resources-for-running-a-pbl-workshop/

Jowen Hillyer is currently Head Teacher of English at Taree High School (a Connected Communities school) in rural NSW. She has been a teacher, head teacher and teacher educator for 19 years, with experience in both rural and disadvantaged public schools, as well as 3 years as an Associate Lecturer at The University of Sydney. In her current role, Jowen leads a large, diverse faculty in new approaches, innovation and student engagement. Her research interests are centred on project based learning, boys’ writing in the middle years and mentoring programs for beginning English teachers.

 

Engaging reluctant readers: some ideas for upper primary and junior secondary classrooms

Deb McPherson has advice that will allow you to enthuse even your most reluctant readers…

What might truly grab your reluctant readers?

Background

Research detailed in “An Exceptional Schooling Outcomes Project 2001-2006”(AESOP)  (Sawyer, Brock & Baxter, 2007) into what happens in effective classrooms had something to say about “Lower ability” students in English. It showed that such students in those effective classrooms were not confronted by a sole diet of functional literacy, pen and paper activities, comprehension and vocabulary work, but also (my italics) “engaged with IT, media, novels, poetry”.

Classroom strategies

Dr Jackie Manuel at Sydney University has highlighted the importance of choice — the need for students to have some say in the texts selected for study and enjoyment. Her paper, Effective Strategies to Address the Needs of Adolescents 13+ Experiencing Difficulty with Reading: A Review of the Literature (2003), is available online at http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/middleyears/assets/pdf/jmanuelres.pdf and sets out a range of excellent strategies to “enable” students in the classroom.  If, as teachers, we give students the opportunities to write their own texts, to find some of their own texts (using book boxes, library visits/displays and web searches for example), if we position them as writers, readers and viewers worthy of respect and give them time to explore digital and multi-modal texts as well as print texts then we should see increased engagement.

Letting students hear from their peers or older students about the excitement and joys of literature can also really inspire engagement. One strategy is to invite students from other classes who have read or viewed engaging texts and ask them to promote those texts to your class. Such a strategy can also provide models of articulate speaking for younger students. It could also provide a great link between primary feeder schools and their high schools. Using audio versions and book trailers are a key way to increase student interest as well.

Below is a grid showing a small selection of old and new texts that could be effective “hooks” in the classroom in engaging disaffected or resistant students. Texts can move up and down the school years based on the needs and interests of your students.  The table is prefaced with a few reviews as a start in opening up the list. Other reviews are available online at the BOSTES site at http://syllabus.bos.nsw.edu.au/english/english-k10/suggested-texts/ or in the Australian Association for the Teaching of English (AATE) journal English in Australia.

Digital text for Years 6-9 students

Inanimate Alice http://www.inanimatealice.com

Inanimate Alice represents an epiphany of sorts for me; a turning point in my understanding of the amazing appeal of the digital text.

Inanimate Alice was created to be read and viewed online. This interactive novel was created as a story that unfolds over time and on multiple platforms. As the website says it, “uses text, images, music, sound effects, puzzles and games to illustrate and enhance the narrative.” Education Services Australia, Bradfield Company Productions, Promethean Planet and Everloop are some of the players involved in its creation.  

Inanimate Alice is the story of Alice at different times in her life as she travels with her parents around the world. Her story is told over increasingly interactive and complex episodes. As Alice grows older the story’s duration becomes longer and more sophisticated and the interactivity becomes more demanding. In episode one, set in China, Alice is eight and the episode lasts five minutes. Alice’s father has gone missing and she and her mother set out to find him. In those five minutes you share Alice’s anxiety about her father, you travel in the four wheel drive with her mother through confusing and intimidating landscapes, your sense of time is challenged and you too can seek refuge in the games and puzzles Alice plays as the journey continues.

In episode two, set in Italy, Alice is ten and the viewing time lengthens. In episode three, in Russia, Alice is growing up. She is thirteen and hiding in an apartment from some sinister figures who are making trouble for her father. It feels like you are in the closet with her. It takes at least fifteen minutes to participate in this episode. In episode four, Alice is fourteen and the reader/viewer finds her in Great Britain. In this thirty-minute episode Alice is settled in a school and delighted that her school has boys, lots and lots of boys!  As I read, viewed, listened to, (and participated in) the episodes I felt quite drawn into this new medium for storytelling.

Inanimate Alice is a sure-fire way to engage and stimulate students. Students will enjoy and be challenged by the text that will also support their literary, cinematic, and artistic literacies. With edgy music, mesmerizing video and graphics, embedded puzzles and games, and an invitation to participate in the story, how could it miss? This digital text comes with extensive teaching ideas and materials that are freely available online. Set aside some time to read, view and experience Inanimate Alice and you won’t be disappointed. Neither will your students. There is now an exciting new episode to explore in which Alice is sixteen and an aspiring game designer.  She finds that the, “so-called stable hometown life she yearned for is far from perfect. Bored and restless, she skates into deep trouble.” A trailer is available at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SvQ09_nm09Q and there is a facebook group of teachers from all around the world sharing ideas on Inanimate Alice online at https://www.facebook.com/groups/316194721922364/

Fiction for Year 7/8 students

Patrick Ness: A Monster Calls (2011) Walker Books

Ever since I picked up A Monster Calls and read it I have not been able to get it out of my head. It has joined a special company of unforgettable books in my life. I can remember the time and place when I first read it, the profound emotions it evoked and the desire it provoked to tell everyone I knew about this magnificent book. 

In the novel, thirteen-year-old Conor’s mother is dying but Conor will not admit this terrible truth and suffers headaches and nightmares because of the conflict in his heart and life. One night, Conor hears his name being called. Gripping his bedroom window is the yew tree from the graveyard on the hill that has transformed into a massive and menacing monster. The extended illustration on pages 14-17 showing the force and frightening dimensions of this monster is amazing.  But is Conor frightened and overcome?  “Shout all you want” he says, “I’ve seen worse.” And of course he has — as he watches his mother decline into the grip of her disease. But the monster is not finished with Conor, and, over several combative nights he tells Conor stories – stories that lead him and the reader to the final, exquisite line in the book. 

Irish writer Siobhan Dowd had the idea for this book but sadly died of cancer before she could write it.  The publisher asked Patrick Ness if he could write it and his author’s note and dedication to Siobhan adds another aspect to explore in this remarkable book. Myth and life and death have rarely been so powerfully combined.

Jim Kay’s illustrations, his black and white drawings and washes, sometimes extending across three pages, other times a smudged fingerprint or a tangle of lines, are just extraordinary. His partnership with Ness and the great care and respect Walker Books have taken with the production of this text add to its magic. This masterpiece of storytelling won both the Carnegie and Greenway medals in 2012, the only book to do so. A haunting trailer at  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iEX5g6c7ueE is a wonderful way to hook them. An audio version, read by Jason Isaacs is currently available from Book Depository for $15.87. There is also a podcast of Patrick Ness reading a part of his book and answering questions at http://www.theguardian.com/childrens-books-site/audio/2011/may/05/patrick-ness-childrens-book-monster-podcast 

Addictive thrillers for Years 7 and 8

Gabrielle Lord: Conspiracy 365 Book One: January (2010) Scholastic Book one of a series of twelve books: January, February, March, April, May, June July, August, September, October, November and December.

This series has just about everything you have ever seen or read in a thriller and then some more! I started Book One: January on the 3rd of January 2011, as it seemed appropriate, and I was hooked! Over the following few days I managed to get ten of the twelve read. The series provided a relentless ride through murder, kidnapping, mystery and a staggering number of chase sequences that I thoroughly enjoyed.

Callum Ormond is on the run, accused of the attempted murder of his uncle and sister.  But in reality it is a criminal gang who are after him and the secret his dead father tried to communicate to him in drawings just before his death. The Ormond Riddle entails great wealth, danger and death and Callum has to survive for 365 days to find out the answers to the clues his father has left him and solve the Ormond Singularity Puzzle. His good mate Boges is a constant support with technology, food and shelter and the mysterious Winter plays a sometimes ambiguous role as a fellow seeker after truth and ultimately good friend.

Gabrielle Lord also wrote the riveting novel Fortress, about a teacher and group of school children that turn against their sadistic attackers. She has lost none of her edge.

These novels are brisk, accessible and persuasive, including multiple cliff-hangers and enough tautness to keep any reader happy. They would be a great series to entice disengaged readers in Years 7 and 8 but good readers love them too. Buy multiple copies and watch the reading and discussion begin.  It’s all over the top but well written and very exciting.

There is a Conspiracy 365 website to explore at http://conspiracy365.com.au/index.php and a television series. The use of graphics, texting and blogs within each book provides a contemporary context and added teaching and learning opportunities. The reader follows as the pages count down to 3, 2, 1.  This is a timely reminder of the tension in the book as you are always racing to the finish as if a bomb is about to go off — and quite a few do! 

Fiction for Year 9 students

Louis Nowra Prince of Afghanistan  (2015) Allen & Unwin

It’s wonderful to see another young adult novel by Louis Nowra. His Into that Forest was one of the best  books in 2013 and Prince of Afghanistan is a terrific read, especially for those less engaged boys in Years 8 and 9.

Nineteen-year-old Mark and Prince are alone in Afghanistan after a combined Australian/American mission goes badly wrong.  The three kidnapped doctors are safely helicoptered away but Mark sees his friend Casey killed as the second helicopter sent to pick up the remaining soldiers explodes under Taliban fire. Casey’s dog, Prince, is alive but wounded and Mark decides to find a way back to base through enemy territory for both of them.

Prince is a Doberman pinscher who has been trained to detect buried mines and he and his handler Casey had a close relationship. The explosion deafens both Mark and Prince and Mark must use the sense of touch to try and bind Prince to him. Their journey back under cover of darkness will take days and as they are both wounded and have few rations it will be difficult and dangerous as well.

Nowra is a wonderful writer and the tension and drama of Mark and Prince’s story never slackens. Mark’s memories provide flashbacks to his growing up and teenage years.  The death of his mother, his own adolescent drug addition to marijuana and the retreat of his father are succinctly conveyed. Nowra captures the tough life, despair and daily rituals of people in a war-torn country and his ability to create such a convincing setting adds verisimilitude to the tale. This is traditional storytelling at its best as Nowra charts the growing bond between the wounded man and his dog. Evocative full-page photographs of Afghanistan introduce most chapters and there is one of Prince that is very appealing.  From its opening line,  “I am falling from the sky” to its powerful ending this is a text Year 9 students will be happy to explore in most classrooms.  It could also be used towards the end of Year 8.

  • View a table of texts for disengaged students

Deb McPherson taught English in NSW government secondary schools for twenty-eight years as a classroom teacher, Head Teacher and Deputy Principal. She was a member of the committee selecting texts for the Higher School Certificate English courses for over fifteen years.  She worked as a Senior Curriculum Officer, English, at the Board of Studies and as the Manager of English for the NSW Department of Education and Training. She has been a lecturer and tutor at the University of Newcastle and at the University of Wollongong. She is an author of four anthologies for schools for OUP and co-authored Choices for English, a collection of recommended texts for the 7-12 English classroom with Helen Sykes and Ernie Tucker. Her review column, ‘Reading and Viewing with Deb McPherson’, appears in the AATE journal, English in Australia.

Shakespeare Video

CPL Shakespeare in the Classroom from NSW Teachers Federation on Vimeo.

How Goes the New K-6 English Syllabus?

Jenny Williams and Mary-Ellen Betts share some ideas about how Primary English is unfolding …

 

Primary teachers in NSW have been implementing the new NSW K-6 English Syllabus for the Australian Curriculum. At this point in the implementation it is timely to look at teachers’ reactions to the syllabus and consider how they are using it to plan and assess in their classrooms. Discussions with teachers across the state reveal some interesting trends. There are positive aspects to the implementation as well as challenges.

The Positives

The new K-6 English Syllabus supports twenty-first century learners. The learning across the curriculum and Objective E Reflective Learning excite teachers. ‘Assessment for, as and of learning’ fit comfortably with meeting the needs of twenty-first learners. Teachers are addressing ‘assessment as learning’ enthusiastically when they understand the connection with learning intentions, success criteria and feedback. The text requirements open many teachers’ eyes to the possibility of exploring multimodal and spoken texts. Many teachers feel a sense of relief that the syllabus emphasises purpose and audience and how purpose and audience shape the composition of texts, rather than a rigid study of text types.

The key processes of responding to and composing text resonates with teachers as reciprocal aspects of ‘making meaning through language.’ (NSW K-6 English syllabus, page 24) This understanding leads to teachers integrating reading, writing, speaking and listening within the English block.

The Challenges

Implementation of the syllabus document occurred at the same time that the number of DEC consultants available to support teachers across the state diminished significantly. Unfortunately, some overly enthusiastic people with a personal viewpoint to share have partially filled this gap. When searching the internet teachers find sites recommending a scope and sequence of concepts K-6 or using the Literacy continuum to plan for English. Bypassing the syllabus to go in these directions has caused some confusion for teachers. Of course all the new syllabuses have key concepts related to the KLA and the literacy continuum has a purpose but the English syllabus is the mandatory document and the challenge for teachers is to unpack this document, first, with the learning needs of their students in mind. Much of the new document is familiar to teachers from the previous syllabus and actually exploring what is familiar and what is new is the best starting place.

Another challenge for some teachers is how to replace a text type driven view of the syllabus with a more flexible approach to the teaching of reading and writing shaped by the key processes of responding and composing.

Recommendations

All teachers need a hard copy of the syllabus as well as access to an online copy. Both serve different purposes. Teachers need a hard copy to be able to discuss the syllabus in stage meetings and annotate as they explore the content.

Units of work created during the implementation process should be recognised as DRAFTS. As a deeper understanding of the syllabus develops modifications will be made through a process of continual evaluation and improvement.

The main goal now should be familiarisation with the syllabus through discussion with colleagues on the same grade or stage. The more teachers explore what the intended learning in each objective means, the better they are able to design teaching and learning plans to address the intended learning. This exploration leads to planning units of work and experimenting with new texts and concepts. This experimentation is an essential part of coming to understand the ‘Englishness’ of the syllabus. Whole school plans or scope and sequences may follow after this initial phase. So the best advice: open the syllabus and read it.

Jenny Williams and Mary-Ellen Betts have extensive experience as teachers in public schools, including at the senior levels, and now work assisting teachers including through the Centre for Professional Learning and trioprofessional. They can be contacted at trioprofessionallearning.com.au .
 

Posts navigation

Newer posts

Recent Posts

    Recent Comments

    No comments to show.

    Archives

    No archives to show.

    Categories

    • No categories

    QUICK LINKS

    QUICK LINKS

    Join The Union

    Courses

    Journal

    Podcast

    Contact Us

    Share this page

    About

    Who we are

    What we do

    Presenters

    FAQ

    Professional Learning

    Courses

    Journal

    Podcast

    Policy and Guidelines

    Privacy Policy

    Social Media Guidelines

    Our Ethics

    Useful Links

    About

    Head Office Details

    Member Portal

    Media Releases

    Become a member today

    NSW Teachers Federation

    Connect with us

    © 2025 New South Wales Teachers Federation. All Rights Reserved. Authorised by Maxine Sharkey, General Secretary, NSW Teachers Federation, 23-33 Mary St. Surry Hills NSW 2010.